Jackachu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pensils]

I was indeed OK.

Nice animation, but with little idea behind it. As I need a animator, which I now have, maybe you should get yourself a writer?

nijnemans responds:

there was not realy an idea, only a serie starter :)

i already got an idea for te next episode


thx for review

[Crooked Evidence]

Very nice work.

As a media student I must congratulate you upon your use of editing, shot length and effect syncing.

The acting was very nice, very professional. I know how hard it is normally put in a fight scene within a movie without it looking cheap. But despite your film being low budget you managed it very well through having short moments of action as well as close ups for emotion at the right times and fast pace cuts.

Some advise. Use a tripod, the hand held technique of the camera only worked while there was fast paced action. In parts where he was by the river or hiding behind a tree, moments of calm, a steady cam would have worked a lot better. Also a boom and external mic would have worked quite well, as in some parts I could not hear what was being said. I do not know if this is from the rendering process to fit it into a flash or not however.

I also noted the fact that the “stolen tape” was actually a spare DV tape presumably for the camera used to film this. Which was mildly amusing.

All in all a very good piece of work and I would love for you to start making full-length films instead of trailers and teasers.

EmbraceAColdTouch responds:

theese "trailers" and "teasers" are for is to gain expereince.

[The Hunt - A Saga]

Sweet.

It was actually very nice to see flash and video combined to make one movie. Be it the plot was bad and the acting was worse it did actually have some funny parts to it.

My pet hate of your movie was this. "Hey, let's make a 50 second title sequence explaining something people are going to forget soon after the movie has ended."

I really do not like waiting for so long for a movie to start.

CoolDrMoney responds:

I completely agree with ya...only thing is...I didnt want people to be shoved in this without knowing what the hell was going on

But yea I shouldve made it much shorter : /

[That's My Fulp 2]

It was okaish,

It wasn't as funny as I assumed it would be, in fact I rather detest the one-line quips the tank man said.

What I did find funny was this… When the man at the end said. “Please vote this movie a 5 or I will be executed” I clicked 4. He then exploded.

This proceeded to spin me out.

MaddFlash2 responds:

You will be executed then. LMAO JK Thanks for the review

[2D=Infinity Ep2]

One thing.

Background music and more emphases on wording in the narrative.
There were parts in that film where I didn’t believe what was going on very well, mostly because I could see things being blown up, but I couldn’t hear things being blown up. Even a simple music score over the top would have made things better.

Overall an interesting story.

3Dmadness responds:

yer, the sound wasent great but i dident want to make to much noise in case to couldent hear the actor